Touketsu Shinen (you may delete the other one)

[hakushinen]

Name: Touketsu Shinen
Age: 400
Gender: Male
Personality:

Touketsu is the type of person, who gets serious a lot. He is very smart, and maturely quiet. He is loving at times, and goes 110% on everything. He has a great potential, to do well. For example, he never backs down from a fight, meaning he will go full out, no matter what.

He will try to protect all that he knows and loves, no matter the consequences. Although he may protect all he knows and loves, no matter the consequences, he will still try to find loop holes, and use his mind, to make sure he doesn't break the laws of the soul society. One more thing, if you ever take Touketsu's ramen, you will be sorry. Touketsu can be very humorous at times. Well, in his mind he is, but everyone else fake laughs at his jokes, and calls him a dork.

But he tries to be humorous. Touketsu can be out going and hyper sometimes, but that doesn't stop him from doing what he is supposed to do, and when he is on duty or whatever, he is always serious. Other than that he is out going and hyper. Touketsu can be very uptight as well. For example, if someone is goofing off on an assignment, Touketsu is always there to tell them to pick their act up and pull their selves together. Touketsu kind of has a bipolar effect to him.

Most of the time Touketsu is very serious, and uptight though. Such as if someone were to be very confident that they can kill Touketsu, and bragging about what they can do, Touketsu will do all in his power to prove them wrong, because Touketsu believes that he is the best. Although he may believe that, there is a spot in him that knows that there are MUCH stronger people than he is. That is basically all there is to say about Touketsu.

Appearance:

Touketsu wears the normal shinigami uniform. With white ties coming around the waste. It was outlined in white as well. There was a zanpakuto sheathed to his back. The sheathe came from his left side of his waste, to his shoulder, and on the back was the sheathe itself, which held his zanpakuto.

He has white hair that goes down to his eyes and there is three dots beneath his left eye. Touketsu had black pants, they weren't jeans, but they were just pants that were like snow pants, but lighter and weren't loud whenever he were to walk. They were also thin. But not too thin. He wore these scandal type shoes and black tabi. Touketsu has kind of large eyes, that are bright blue.

The rest of his face is kind of small. He has kind of spiky, kind of long hair, that comes down, and reaches his eyes. It looks kind of like Toushiro's hair, just not exactly like it. He has the normal shinigami uniform. He looks like this basically:

Hollow Mask:

Touketsu's Hollow mask forms when Touketsu is about to loose, due to him having almost zero control over his hollow side. The mask has red and black stripes coming from the top, curving to his cheek. The eye brows seem slanted on the mask and it's smile reaches from one side of the mask to the other.

The mask has white in the background color of it. The eyes are black and the pupils are red. There is blue spikes coming from the top, one on the left and one on the right. They represent the ice within him. The red represents the blood, that he must shed, and cause.

It forms as if it was out of thin air, and the air will twirl around his face. Causing the mask to form right then and there. It takes a while though. The mask has cracks all though it as well. That is his Hollow Mask.

Hollow Powers:

None known yet.

Inner Hollow:

His inner hollow looks just like Touketsu, only in opposite colors. His is pitch black and the hair is white. The clothes he wears is white, and the zanpakuto is black. He has black eyes with red pupils.

Zanpakuto's name:

Shirohi Yamagaki

Zanpakuto Spirit:

Touketsu's sword, or zanpakuto, is named Shirohi. The spirit within has long black hair. That goes down to his shoulders. Shirohi has a light blue cloak that comes down into the ice where he lives, and freezes. He has a scar under his right eye, just like Retsu has one under his left eye.

Ice in the world of his zanpakuto is icy because Shirohi is mostly the element of ice. The world is almost like a dimension of ice. Also Shirohi wears a long shirt that covers the front. It is black and it also freezes in the ice beneath him. Shirohi looks as if he is in a crouching position, on what looks like a cross made of ice.

The cross has a texture that is the looks of crystal and ice mixed. The cross was crystalized four hundred years ago, when Touketsu died. When Touketsu died his zanpakuto was born as well, causing this world to be created as well.

Un-released Zanpakuto's Appearance:

The sword itself is a sword that looks like a regular Katana. The blade is out to 4 feet long. It has a white handle with blue straps coming up the handle to the hilt. The handle is white with a squarish shape to it. the handle is white as well. And has a frosty chill to it, making it not spark when hitting another sword, but frost will fly from it. The sword may seem like it is covered in frost, but it isn't it is just a cold blade that is white, with a shine in it. It's just that when it hits another sword, it will shed frost.

Shikai Release phrase::

Hail Shirohi.

Shikai Appearance::

The shikai looks the same basically only more broad. The blade though, actually turns into an ice shard. Just not fragile like an ice shard. The shard is as strong as steal, just as the regular sword would be. The blade gets much colder than it was as a blade. There is some abilities that come with this, like a beam of frozen aura from the tip of the sword.

The blade grows from 2 inches thick, to 5 inches thick. Still 4 feet long. The words to release Shirohi is "Hail, Shirohi!" The shikai also has a frosty look to it. The blade is also surrounded by icy aura type substance. Below is a picture of the basics what it looks like. Retsu can swing his zanpakuto, and ice will shoot out in the shape of a snake, that can pierce the opponent. Also it gives Retsu amazing speed. He is 10 times faster, without flashstep. When he does use flashstep, it is faster than a normal flashstep.

Shikai Abilities::

Higher speed.

Able to shoot ice from the tip of the blade.

Bankai Description:

In bankai form, it is no longer a sword. It is where the blade suddenly forms into nothing but ice and wraps around Touketsu's arm. This ice can spread throughout the air silently, and it can become a vapor, and enter the opponent's body through pores. Also, the ice that is on his arm, can spread through the air like a snake and pierce the opponent's body.

The ice is pure blue. The name of the bankai is Shirohi Yamagaki. The zanpakuto is now an arm made of ice, that can be used as a whip. This also means that Touketsu can make the ice do the same effect as his shikai. Although it may be similar to his shikai, it is a lot stronger because Touketsu can make the ice become vapor, and it can enter the opponent through pores.

Bankai Abilities:

Higher speed than shikai.

THe sleeve of ice and become a vapor, and the pores on Touketsu become closed. Then anybody within range could get the vapored ice enter their body through pores. Once it gets the chance to enter, it can turn to solid ice, and the opponent would have to find some way to get the large amount of solid ice out of there body before it kills them.

Shoot ice from the tip of the blade.

Resurreccion Description:

Touketsu looks as if he is a large beast of some sort when he transforms into a hollow completely. He has his normal hair but longer, and his mask is fully on. Plus his body is covered in rock and ice. The rock is the same material as his mask. His eyes become black and red pupils. He becomes really insane. The ice is covered in few places, but if the ice is sliced, the weapon used to slice becomes frozen.

Resurreccion Abilities:

Highest speed out of all of his shikai and bankai.

Frozen skin, making the blades that touch him freeze. but only if it cuts through the ice on him for he is not fully covered in ice, just in some spots.

Skill Level: Kidou: Intermediate
Skill Level: Swordsmanship: Intermediate
Skill Level: Shunpou: Advanced
Skill Level: Hand-to-hand: Advanced
History/Background:

Touketsu was only 14 when he past on to the soul society. He doesn't remember how, or when he died, but when he past on, his appearance stayed the same age. He is 400 realistically. He also still appears to be 14 years old. He lived in district 20 for about 100 years, when he finally found his inner spiritual energy. He went to the shinigami academy and became a soul reaper. He was a member of the 8th division. He was in that division for about 200 years and finally became a Captain of his squad. Also, achieved bankai.

Touketsu achieved bankai at the age of 100. He was trained by his best friend who past on to a new life, because he was killed by a hallow. His name and appearance was then forgotten, which is kind of sad. But his best friend was a captain, and a strong one at that. This person, helped Retsu get bankai, before Touketsu was even a lieutenant. It wasn't really his best friend that did it, his best friend just showed him how he can learn it. He did that because you can only learn it by seeking your bankai within your zanpakuto. So the real person who actually helped him achieve it was Shirohi.

His best friend was killed by an Hallow, when they were both out on vacation, they were just hanging out in their gekkai. When the hallow shows up though, Touketsu killed it... But killed it after his best friend had died.

Touketsu still trains, and builds up his squad and what not. He trains to be the best. He builds up his strength and raises his bankai, and vaguely remembers his best friend that died, and is working up the power to destroy the soul in which killed his friend, and find his friend's new life. That is basically all the known things about Touketsu...

A few days after he was captain, he got word that Kaji Enkou, and Sosuke Aizen, were planning an attack. He was assigned to go to the world of the living to hunt hollows and find any evidence of the attack from Aizen and Enkou. Kaji first made his appearance by making it seem as if a meteor struck the forest just outside of Karakura, and made his way to Karakura town.

Touketsu met up with him and fought him. Kaji's spirit pressure was much higher than that of Touketsu's. Touketsu's sword was then cut in two. Touketsu lost almost all of his spirit pressure. Touketsu trained and trained until he could get his soul reaper powers back again. He had to fight a hollow that was growing within him in order to get that power back.

When he almost couldn't fight it off, he was able to fight half of it all. He got his shinigami powers back. But he also attained hollow powers, and became what is known to be a vizard.

[taicho]

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[nickcca]

I'm sorry but your profile is confusing me alot as for one ya power and ya zanpuktos power there is not enough detail i mean what fast can he go and other detail what long can be do it for and what is his weakness while using it we all know soul reaper has not have the perfect zanpukto.

also with ya history is way to short it need more details more length into his history i never the less confusing because most the captains and vice captains before them where all the virzrds in the anime and manga show. With that it little mix up try to orderer ya hisorty in chapters in his life it make thins alot easier to read.

so I'm sorry ya profile is confusing as hell if want my advise try someone seated member of squad 8 like a 4th seat or something way more convincing story and also maybe like he most recent vrizred then even thought you start weaker it great fun developing him as well.

I don't know just a few ideas i tough it might be of use to you we do want you on this site but for mo i can't say yes to this profile tell me when done editing it and tell i take a second look ok.